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In my own world, I'm safe and sound.
In my own world, I dance freely around.
I twirl and spin, and sing if I wish,
In my own world... I am free.

In my own world, it's warm and bright,
And, if I want I can stay up at night.
The stars, oh! how they shine!
They doth twinkle and watch over me.

The moon and the sun, vigilant as always,
But never do they stay in one place.
My own world is for only my eyes,
For only I have the key.
I wrote this poem months ago, and I hope that you like it! :)

Comments are much appreciated! ^^
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JamesAlder Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This one gets to my own heart. I respect this poem, and enjoy it. I really like how you described the sun and moon as vigilant. I feel like that is an excellent adjective for those two cosmic watchers; as they are indeed always looking down upon us from one side of the world or the other. 
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xXArtimisXx Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Student General Artist
I really appreciate your respect, Tim! It makes me feel happy! :hug: That's just how I view the sun and moon. They are opposite each other in pretty much everything, even their positions sometimes. If one isn't watching us, then the other surely is.
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SrTw Featured By Owner May 12, 2013   General Artist
I love it, I love it, I LOVE it!
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xXArtimisXx Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you! ^^
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SrTw Featured By Owner May 13, 2013   General Artist
You're so welcome always! ˜‿˜
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xXArtimisXx Featured By Owner May 13, 2013  Student General Artist
:)
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Ursidaefool Featured By Owner May 5, 2013
me gusta :3
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xXArtimisXx Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Student General Artist
I'm glad! ^^
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brighteyes25 Featured By Owner May 5, 2013
I love this, and it was just what I needed to read right now! Beautiful! :D
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xXArtimisXx Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you! And I'm glad that I could help! :)
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